MadBoy118
This user has not published any games publicly yet.
Reviews by MadBoy118
Review for Shrunk and Captured: Unbreakable
07 Apr 2022
So to preface this, I must say I am greatly enjoying this experience. I hesitate to call it a game since there isn't too much interactivity just yet. But, there's nothing to complain about there. The writing is nice, and the development of Maya and how the protagonist views her is interesting. There are a few issues, but that's to be expected of an incomplete WIP such as this.
A few of your choices (direction wise) could be a bit more elaborated upon, like I mean after climbing off the desk and heading to the tights, it could tell you that heading "down" means entering the tights. So basically just a bit more detail in the non-story sequences. A better example would be during the Maya body-exploration, knowing where each direction would take you would be nice.
Your "remembers" are interesting. It's a nice variety of stories showing the relationship between Maya and the protagonist while also developing how psychopathic Maya is.
Maybe a bit more in-world effects would be nice. By that I mean, like the scene where you poke Maya's breasts a possible second-time dialogue being prepared where she's like: "Oh~? You're doing it again." and then she punishes you some more, maybe even using the same text, just making it feel like we're doing it again, if you know what I mean.
A few minor details could be brushed up, like when you move onto the bed before resting on your bed causing her to enter the room, it lets you climb up still and interacts as if she's already there.
I choose against referring to the Living Room since it is unfinished, but I am excited to meet Lyza as I do have a certain favour towards giants that are psychopathically dominating/teasing. So, if Lyza is anyway similar to Maya I'll definitely like her.
It has been a very long time since you've updated, which is very much a pity. But, hopefully you'll come back to this one day and continue it, this has great potential and I am very excited to see more.
A few of your choices (direction wise) could be a bit more elaborated upon, like I mean after climbing off the desk and heading to the tights, it could tell you that heading "down" means entering the tights. So basically just a bit more detail in the non-story sequences. A better example would be during the Maya body-exploration, knowing where each direction would take you would be nice.
Your "remembers" are interesting. It's a nice variety of stories showing the relationship between Maya and the protagonist while also developing how psychopathic Maya is.
Maybe a bit more in-world effects would be nice. By that I mean, like the scene where you poke Maya's breasts a possible second-time dialogue being prepared where she's like: "Oh~? You're doing it again." and then she punishes you some more, maybe even using the same text, just making it feel like we're doing it again, if you know what I mean.
A few minor details could be brushed up, like when you move onto the bed before resting on your bed causing her to enter the room, it lets you climb up still and interacts as if she's already there.
I choose against referring to the Living Room since it is unfinished, but I am excited to meet Lyza as I do have a certain favour towards giants that are psychopathically dominating/teasing. So, if Lyza is anyway similar to Maya I'll definitely like her.
It has been a very long time since you've updated, which is very much a pity. But, hopefully you'll come back to this one day and continue it, this has great potential and I am very excited to see more.