Nerezza415

Who Killed Him?
by Nerezza415
Text adventure games by Nerezza415
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03 Apr 2015
The story concept is pretty interesting. You have to find some treasure, fair enough. However, the grammar errors, how unrealistic it was, and you have to do a certain string of things or you die. I'd suggest fix the grammar, and make more endings for the things you choose, rather than instant death.