Ok, you two need to chill out. It really isn't even that bad. I love using Inklewriter and I'm glad you used it too. Yeah there are some spelling and grammar mistakes but the plot was actually really beautiful. Honestly, I don't think those other two reviewers are friends of the author, but if they are they are right. When you look past the mistakes, the story is really sad, and the twists are kind of shocking.
This was a really interesting story, I really liked it. Keep writing.
