The poems are great! Maybe it could work some flow. The reason why I gave it 5 stars is because the way the poet delivers mood is so vividly and clearly that you can feel what they are feeling.
My favorite is Pause. It's different from all the poems since it doesn't try to send mood. Rather, it explains how powerful the ability of pausing is. I would think that pausing would be such an amazing ability that we all underestimate.
