The concept is fun: This immature guy that acts like a toddler to avoid chores. However the relationship with the wife disturbed me a little in the end, since I actually tough it was fittier if she actually was her mother.
However the game is far to be good (and fun also, actually). It is just a sequence of "right choise" and "clearly death trap".
I am a huge Harambe believer. Despite that, this game is pretty good.
It makes you enter the under-esteemated perspective of a captived animal, with a deep atmosphere of unknown and upcoming drama.
I really liked its style: put out the meme from its name and you can put it out of Comedy section.
The story is quite fun. However, besides that it is comprehensibly short, it misses an important factor to an interactive story: interaction. There are only two binary choices: the wrong answer of the first one just makes you repeat the choice; the wrong one of the second one ends the story.
Also, it is written in a very bad english. At first I thought the writer couldn't just speak english properly, but keeping up with the story I thought it was intentional since dinosaurs are stupid, and this added homor to the narration. But in the ending the apologies of the writer makes clear it was the first case.
Nice first attempt, keep doing a good job!
