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Review for Romance is Everywhere

the concept is very interesting but the choices seem to be quite limited. there were lots of pages where all you could do was press forward and let the story roll on it's own... a little bit more interactivity would be nice, perhaps a little puzzle like putting on your shoes or something before going out would be nice to keep the player feeling like playing instead of just reading it through :)

also, the text message part: it might be better to just show the latest message instead of all of them, as it made me feel kinda irritated finding the new text part on each page reading through the same stuff over and over again.

looks good though, keep up the good work :)