I'd give this a five if it were finished. I really liked the one path that didn't abruptly end. This shows a lot of potential, but I do suggest trashing the introduction. While I don't mind it, others might get offended and view it as rude. Also, fix the typos. Other than that, I would encourage you to work on this more.
I really liked this game, it really makes you think about your decisions before you make them. One slight mistake and you die, no joke. It's got some interesting commentary, but it isn't amazing. The combat is this game's strong suit, and that's what it's all about anyway.