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Review for Is it still here?

This was a pretty entertaining game, and the story is nice.

But in my opinion, I feel that the story could have been enhanced even more if you added sound effects and audio, though it still feels amazing without it!
The story was almost confusing, but you made sure to clear up any confusion as you went along, which I appreciated.

The punctuation was extremely unclear, which threw me off a little.

However, great story idea, and good job at executing it in such a great way; you definitely spent a good amount of time planning!

Review for The Last Light of Solcarth

I really like this game, it's well written, and easy to understand.
I appreciate how the story begins almost instantly, without the player having to wait, or spend a lot of time playing it to get to the actual plot of the game.
I found it very amusing how the king reacts when you refuse to do work for him.

However, the only feedback I have is that you are missing a couple of quotation marks, and that the grammar is a bit wonky. It didn't change my opinion of the game at all, though it is something to watch out for next time.

Great job!

Review for Opposites attract

I liked how the storyline was different for each MBTI, and how I had no choice but to pick the MBTI that my MBTI usually hates, and that was really funny!

The only thing I have to say for feedback, is that at a lot of points, you were missing quotation marks, which made me a bit confused.

You didn't complicate the story too much, and kept it simple, good job!