Best narration i have seen on this site. Simply amazing. You literally can see what is happening and feel what the characters are feeling.
Please don't think i was bored, i enjoyed every single scene but Tia, you could have just published this as a story since (i think) the only BIG chooise we make is at the very end of the game and till that point all we have to do is just hit the continue button (almost)
If you want to play this, don't expect a 'game'. Expect an awesome horror story and enjoy it as it is.
Great work overall.