Story was cliche, but not horrible enough to give an appalling rating. The mocking tone of the narration takes away the mood of the horror, and it seems to solely rely on the images just to scare the reader.
I loved it..even if in the end I died. It was very funny at the same time as it was suspenseful. Few spelling errors (Though you did a great job anyway)...definitely going to play it again to see what was in the water!