Reviews by BMenSD

Review for When I Grow Up
21 Jul 2017
I recommend this story for it's many interesting endings, however, it kind of felt all over the place because it never really took the time to explain what was going on. Besides that and a few grammatical errors, it was still overall an entertaining 20-30 minutes.

Review for Origin Trail
18 Jul 2017
A funny, entertaining story that really brings you in it. Very clever, keep up the great work!