This game is decent, but it is absolutely FULL of spelling and grammar mistakes. Are you a non-native speaker, or... just young? (I hope you aren't TOO young...) Regardless of your excuse, the writing is hard to read for a English nerd like me.
Thankfully, you are in luck!
Just take all the written dialogue and text, and paste it into Grammarly. It's a spellchecker that will make sure your writing is much better, or at least get rid of the MANY spelling and grammar mistakes.
If you don't wanna use Grammarly, that's fine, but you NEED to fix the spelling errors ASAP or this game will suffer greatly. As a Textadventure, it should be your number one priority, in my opinion. You could also do well with a bit better pacing, and dialogue, but based on the current state of the writing, I think you should take it slow.
Here is the link to the Grammarly website. It's a FREE chrome extension, and it's amazing!
I'm giving it just under a perfect score, even though you earned a perfect score. Here's why: Because I'm an asshole.
But for real, this game is great. By far the highest quality textadventure I've ever seen, but to be fair, I'm no connoisseur as I only have played vore themed textadventures. But as far as vore themed ones go, this is near the top of the list, at least as far as it's polished looks go.
The game-play is why the game doesn't get a perfect score from me. It suffers from the same problems as an almost identical RPG maker game, shrinking fun. I guess great minds think alike, y'know?
The problem is, even though both games are a almost solid A, it's the gameplay that irks me a bit in both. It just kinda feels too hard for the genre. The RNG is pure agony, and the actual gameplay is pretty lackluster, but that's probably because I'm just not a fan of turn-based RPGs. I mean, I'm not saying I don't like a challenge in games, but ehhh... when I want a vore game I just kind of prefer an interactive story, rather than an RPG. I just kind of exhausted all of the vore textadventures it seems, because I can't find any more.
TL;DR I suck at this game, the RNG is annoying, REEEEEEEEEEEEE!
Anyway, just my thoughts.