JRehfeldt

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Reviews by JRehfeldt

08 Jun 2017
I'm a little SOUR that I didn't get the ending on my first try. Very good story.
(5)

Review for Zork
08 Jun 2017
Good, but not the same as the original game.
(4)

Review for Test of the water
08 Jun 2017
"Something had turned it to smithereens"
That's not a phrase. A better word would be Goo or Mush.
"I woke up with a huge pain in my head,like"
Space after comma please. There are more of this mistake too.
Breakfast".
The period goes before the quotes.
"My mom shouted"get
Should be "My mom shouted, "Get
The pictures have signatures on them and makes them odd.
You keep forgetting to put spaces after periods and commas.
"Cereals"
Not a word.
"Discowered"
Not a word.
Norway needs to be capitalized.
"Damedge"
Not a word.
"evacuete"
Not a word.

Honestly, it sounds like a fourth grader wrote it. There are MANY spelling and grammar errors that must be corrected. It is way to short.
(3)

Review for WWII
08 Jun 2017
Not bad. I bet this will turn out nice. Maybe change the name to attract a little more attention? Classical choose-your-own-adventure game. Can't wait to see it finished!
(4)

Review for AWOKEN
08 Jun 2017
For your first game, it's very well thought out, but I don't like games with no typing involved. Clicking on those blue things was a little confusing. There was little thinking involved. All you had to do was click. But it is a start and is heading in the right direction.
(3)


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