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Very interesting and unique. There are some typos but overall it's written well. Is there a "true" ending to this or do they all loop back to the beginning?
It's definitely better than average and well-written but the ending was too abrupt. There was also a problem with text not showing up at one point, the font you use for the choices is too dark to read against a black background, and there were very few meaningful choices here other than the obviously wrong ones.
Well-written and interesting but short
Pretty damn funny but all the options basically led to the same thing so not that great as a CYOA. Plus, really short
This is one of the best CYOAs I've read on this site. I liked seeing how all the branches played out--very intriguing
I really liked this CYOA based on Jurassic Park altho I thought some of the choices were too obvious as to which was the right one
This is unfortunately not well-written and too short and simplistic to be something I could recommend
I was expecting this to be like The Descent but found that it's more like the interaction between Batman and the Joker. I was a little disappointed by that but I can still appreciate that it's a well-written story
Well written and funny. I really enjoyed this. It was 20 minutes well spent! I also appreciate how you added the checkpoint system which really cuts down on the frustration of getting back to where you were after reaching a dead end.