I appreciated the religious humor here, and the length of play required to complete this gamebook was in fact true to the author's word. (It was short.)
My main concern about God's Day Off was the amount of time I spent reading. I think I made 6 or 7 actual decisions during the course of game play, and I had to read 2 or 3 pages worth of material before I could get there.
Radial, although what appears to be your first attempt at writing was average in my opinion, you definitely have some potential in the gamebook department. I'll be on the lookout, casually, for more material from you in the future.
Thank you for your contribution.
First Times is a fantastic deviation from the classic Text Adventure genre. It utilizes both sound and game timers to give the player the most horrific experience possible. The game play and in-game descriptions are both shocking and intense. It's amazing what Hero Robb accomplishes in his Text Adventure debut.
Fans of classic gaming, horror, or anyone looking to experience something strange and different should definitely play First Times. I truly can't wait to see what Hero Robb comes out with next. I don't care what it is, I'm playing it.