The Tale of the Smiling Man by Evan11

Review dogtreatwoofz

I didnt like this too much. There wasnt too much detail,and the only option was to stab him. -_- I just6...didnt like this.

Review JonniIslam

You take the knife from the man. Do you be aggressive and "stap" him, or do you be peaceful and talk to him?

[ONLY OPTION] stab him

There's so many flaws that I stapped myself in the dick

Review aceofspades111

The sound effects scared the crap out of me!

Comment Azura Davis

This isn't bad persay, but it needs work. The descriptions are very bland and vague, and could use some work. There are some grammar issues, but I've seen worse.

One thing I found strange, when the man comes into your apartment and you call for help, the game ends with the police coming and taking the man out. The only way to die is to try to punch him in the apartment. I guess I feel like the police showed up too quickly. There should have been more after him stabbing the guy who comes to help.