The Tale of the Smiling Man by Evan11

A horror story of a man who is following, what will he do?
Review dogtreatwoofz
07 Aug 2014
I didnt like this too much. There wasnt too much detail,and the only option was to stab him. -_- I just6...didnt like this.

Review JonniIslam
16 Oct 2013
You take the knife from the man. Do you be aggressive and "stap" him, or do you be peaceful and talk to him?

[ONLY OPTION] stab him

There's so many flaws that I stapped myself in the dick

15 Jul 2013
The sound effects scared the crap out of me!

Comment Azura Davis
18 May 2013
This isn't bad persay, but it needs work. The descriptions are very bland and vague, and could use some work. There are some grammar issues, but I've seen worse.

One thing I found strange, when the man comes into your apartment and you call for help, the game ends with the police coming and taking the man out. The only way to die is to try to punch him in the apartment. I guess I feel like the police showed up too quickly. There should have been more after him stabbing the guy who comes to help.

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