Create your Own Warrior Cat! by Willowdapple

Review by BasementKidsEatBeans

Not many options to choose from. Only like 4 personality options. Appearance shouldn't be based on what you look like, as most people have brown hair and almost everybody's character would be a brown cat. It definitely needs way more options.

Review by TriangleGames

I've only given you two stars, but there is fun and potential here. I like your ideas, but they're not implemented as well as they could be. I would recommend updating it.

The issue with this as a work of interactive fiction is partially stated in its placement in the sandbox: not enough choices. You actually have quite a few choices here, but we are asked to take notes instead of the game actually handling our selections as we go along.

The use of the word "tribe" in my name/rank (E) feels a little confusing/redundant seen next to a separate "clan" designation.

I take issue with the vote concept. My favorite of the three stories does not result in the personality that makes sense for me or that I would choose, and it isn't the game I would personal recommend to you as someone as a first game in interactive fiction. I refer to the surprise party. This has all the trappings of a hilarious comedy of errs, but they are marked by having many moving parts that become confusing to the characters in the story. That would be fun to play, but a confusing nightmare to design!

Review by goodbunny2

useless.
Really.