Demo by bcstankiewic

This is just a demo. Leave feedback please!
Comment TheGlassSea
06 Mar 2016
Loved the Undertale Reference: made my day! :D
It's a pretty interesting beginning so far, however, the options/descriptions could use a little more clarification.
For example, if you choose to not care about getting up, your mom tells you to go to your room. Did you go downstairs during that time? Did you just want to eat and go back to sleep?
Maybe add a few more sentences in there to help it flow, but other than that it was a great start! Looking forward to the full version! :)

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