Welcome back to the world of Warrior Cats! You just had a strange and terrifying dream that included Jaypaw and Brightpaw. You just saw them being taken away from you as you were dragged back. You have a feeling that was the last you'd ever see of them though you hope that that dream wouldn't come true. Is there a chance you could prevent it from happening?
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Its good! The story has a lot of dudpense, also I think adding the next part would be great, even though these take a whle. I would say, that some part can get long, and it mainly focuses on dawn'paw in every part for this series, and often Dawn'paw is put instead of Fire'paw, so theres a bit of a mix between the two cats. Other then that Excellent!
It's a really good series. I like how you try add lots of excitement, and suspense on what will happen next-the only thing I'd say you to fix on is to make the story a little less confusing, such as artistTreble said. :)
I literally came back to this site after so long and basically played all of your games in one sitting. At 4AM.
I'm a fan of what you have going here! Unique, but sprinkled with all sorts of familiar bits from the series. It's a perfect balance.
My only advice is to maybe cut down the length of some of your sentences. I'm no grammar nazi, but sometimes I get lost in all the action you put into just one sentence. Do you plan on making the different choices a bit more unique in the story, or is the main goal the only thing to keep in mind? Merely curious!
Thank you once again for making such an enjoyable little series!
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