The Steps to Insanity by Monnixo_

Comment CloudlessKnight

Minor typos - "should of" "must of" and etc aren't phrases, it's "should HAVE" "must HAVE"
(walking also allowed you to take in the more scenic route of your neighbourhood which gave you the time to just empty your mind and be at peace..) - I picked the Club, why's it saying shopping centre?
Trying to figure the artwork for when you get your knife, I can't tell what I'm looking at.
Aside from those minor issues, this was a delight to read and I was not at all expecting those endings.