Funnysauros Raptor by danielgi2

Review by Sterconium

The story is quite fun. However, besides that it is comprehensibly short, it misses an important factor to an interactive story: interaction. There are only two binary choices: the wrong answer of the first one just makes you repeat the choice; the wrong one of the second one ends the story.
Also, it is written in a very bad english. At first I thought the writer couldn't just speak english properly, but keeping up with the story I thought it was intentional since dinosaurs are stupid, and this added homor to the narration. But in the ending the apologies of the writer makes clear it was the first case.
Nice first attempt, keep doing a good job!