Warrior Cats: Part 4 by Warriorcats908

Note from Warriorcats908: To those who have been playing my series, thank you for playing and I apologize for making you wait for sooooo long but during the global event that has happened, I expected that I would have more time to create Part 4 but I have been busy taking care of my family but they didn't get the virus which is a good thing. But anyways, here is Part 4, the next part you've all been waiting for!

*By the way, I kept reading the prophecy I made and I thought that it needed improvement. So I changed the prophecy and it goes like this: 'One out of three of a kin will be the light to save the clans. From the movement of water will come the thunder and the wild cat. From the fast and the speed will come the rapid, the flower and the snake. From the shades and the not-actually-chilled hearted will come the opposite of the sun and the sky that holds the stars. And from the brave and the the respectful will be the light, the bird and the brilliant.' Yes, it is a very big prophecy and somehow the cats could remember all that. So hope you like the new and improved prophecy and just forget about the old and boring prophecy.

Welcome back to Warrior Cats! The Gathering has finished and you are on your way back to ThunderClan camp. After you hear the prophecy once more, you remember the look on all the cats faces and a few prideful ones as if they were the ones to be a part of the prophecy. As you grow and your siblings grow older, just a few more moons left until you become a warrior. But as you grow, dangers become more fierce and challenges become tougher until the day comes. Will you do the best you can for your Clan until you become a warrior?
Review Fernpool
16 Jun 2023
I like it a lot!👍

Comment Amberleaf123
14 Jul 2021
Omg, so entertaining, can't wait for part 5!

Review goodbunny2
29 May 2021
I mean I've seen better...

But keep up the good work! I'm sure some people are into this sorta stuff. There aren't many good warriors games out there - most of the GOOD ones are underrated. This one is okay though!

Anyway, all that aside, I do think your plot is overrated - like literally, 3 cats with a prophecy to save the clans? Sound familiar? The books themselves use that exact plot. If you want to copy it, Copy it better than THIS.

It is incredibly obvious that the three antagonists are going to be in the prophecy. Like really obvious. It makes the game lose fun with that much FORESHADOWING.

I would like you to actually SPACE OUT your freaking lines too. My eyes hurt from reading all of that... and it wasn't even worth it! This is so short with so little plot development!

Also.. FREAKING do better grammar. You've reviewed and critized many peoples' work, but yours isn't matching you're OWN standards.

But if you throw away all that, then otherwise it's great... i can see a lot of effort put into it too, so props to you! Good job on this!

Anyway, if you still aren't mad at me yet, check out my text adventure game! (warriors)

It's defiantly NOT perfect, but I'd appreciate if you reviewed or something....

http://textadventures.co.uk/games/view/3agct2hj30gbrces4oqsww/warriors-warrior-cats-swirling-fate-kit-to-leader

OK game!

Review Stormystar
27 Apr 2021
sUCH A GOOD CLIFFHANGER! i CAN'T WAIT FOR PART 5!

22 Apr 2021
CANT WAIT FOR PART 5!! THIS IS SO GOOD

Comment Silk-Whisper
04 Apr 2021
this series is awesome! can't wait for part 5~

Comment Monoxide
26 Jan 2021
Before I get onto the real part of this message to you, I'd like to say this: My brain couldn't even comprehend the new and improved prophecy.
Ok, anyways, this series is my favorite one so far. I'm really exited for part 5! Keep up the good work!
^^

22 Jan 2021
I literally Love this, I cannot wait for Part 5!

Comment Kiplol03
22 Jan 2021
Noice. Very Fabulous. Amazing.
When I heard "Killing the deputy of another clan is going to lead to my exile" I will be choosing that choice when I see that's available. Also great story

Comment FernStone
05 Jan 2021
I also just realized that one of the main characters you can play is dawnkit so if its a problem then tell me and I can Change it for you since mine is still in the editing stage.

Comment FernStone
05 Jan 2021
Hi I am a new cat here who would like you to read my story and tell me how you think of it and the link is right here!

http://textadventures.co.uk/games/view/maojjgjufkylkipmpwxhfg/warrior-cats-thunderclan

I hope that You will comment your opinion and enjoy. Also I liked your entire story and think It was great. Could You give me some tips on how to make it better anyone? I liked your new prophacy by the way!

Comment Dawnlight42
20 Sep 2020
this is friggin amazing! i ubderstand that you have alot going on, but 1: have u progressed well with part5? and if ur still working, i belive in u ^^ your so good at story telling, im making a warrior cat book, any tips? 2: might i know where i coud find the link 2 part5 when its posted? i just wanna make sure i find it bc these r so good! (it also turns out my favorite oc rn is Dawnlight ^^ i was happy when i say "Dawnkit")

Review warri0rcats
07 Aug 2020

i love how you changed the prophecy to be more interesting and I really enjoyed how much effort was put into this! Also I can't wait for part five!

Comment warri0rcats
07 Aug 2020
It's fine,I totally get it, and I can't wait for part five :)

Comment Warriorcats908
16 Jul 2020
Here is the part you've all been waiting for! I apologize for the lateness but due to the global event, I have been busy doing the best I can for my family. But now that I have some help for my family, I've currently had enough time to start working on Part 4. So here it is. Do read the last scene as it is a huge cliff-hanger. But don't worry, because this time, I'll try to put in enough time to begin working on Part 5. Anyways, enjoy! And thank you to all my fans for being patient and continue playing my series.

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