Good first quest.
I'm pretty new here too,
If someone could check out my 2 stories : Memory Path and/or Stray Dog,
I'd really appreaciate the feed back.
Good job,
Claire6129
I love this game, the first time I also tried to give the bicuits to the dog and use the leash even though I guessed what would happen but tried anyway. The next time I tried something else and got it!
> use leash on dog You succesfuly put on the dogs collar and begin trying to draw it into the house. Oh, no! The dog runs away! And there! There comes a car! Oh no!!! Oh, I'm sorry, but you've lose...
Not too bad for a first game. A lot of red herrings.(useless objects) But you can win it. It's a little short for me though. I'm gonna give it a 4 because I don' want to discourage alex. Good first game.