I loved it!!! I WON!! (After three epic fails) Yay!!
Hello Paper Assassin! Of course I remember you. So good to hear from you. I too left the game for a little while, but I am back, and I hope to make another story soon.
Your friend, Claire6129
Very interesting, and good for a laugh or two. Or three. Or maybe four.
Wow! I've lost track how many times I've clicked on "Try again", because I keep dying! It's weird how just one mistake can kill you, but it was indeed fun, good job! ;)
You say this is a test story? Well then I can't wait until you make an even better one!
Great work, loved it! You really captured their characters.
I don't want to read.
I want to play.
"Bloody Brilliant!" I'm guessing that you're a Doctor Who fan? Simply loved it. When I found out that you weren't finished, I was sad, because this is good stuff!
:D
J'ai adoré cette jeux, très amusant!
Translation:
I adored this game, very amusing/fun!
I speak both languages… XD
This is pretty good. Weird options, and at first I was a bit confused, but then I understood that I was going to a normal school, then ended up in "Candy Land".
Overall it was good, in my opinion, if you maybe explained a bit more at first, and maybe add in a random moment, (certain people on this site love randomness) it would be worth a 5 star. The grammar and spelling was very good, and I think that your next game, (if you do make one), will be a 5 star worthy.
Nice game.
:)
Lol, so funny!
A little mean if you lose though… LOL!
OU….
Yes, yes, very good. The choice of background, (black) and the words in white gave it a little boost of scary.
(In my opinion, that was a nice choice to make this worth a five star.) Well, that and the words itself. It was really well done. Please don't hesitate to try any of my games, by clicking my name in blue, Claire6129. (At the top of the review.)
Lol. I clicked What the heck for one, and it got me killed! I did not expect that! LOL.
Ps, please try out some of mine by clicking on my name in blue at the top of the review. Thx in advance!
I loved it.
So funny, with the five year olds! I'm now starting to babysit, but now I'm a bit nervous…. LOL!
PS, try some of my games, they might not be the best, but that's probably because most of them I rushed through, feeling sad that some were epic fails! :D
I liked it.
Especially the music.
For me, it's hard to get music without possibly getting a law suit after wards. :(
Nice game! Lol, I kept dying!
By the way, thank you for saying you like my games. I really appreciate it.
This game is so funny! You die. You die. …and you die. ….and you burn to death…… lol!
There are so many ways to die in this game!
Great game!
I love these kind of games where you decide what the ANIMAL does. Yep, I'm an animal lover, and also a real good writer. The ONLY spelling error that I noticed, was this, "TO busy to notice."
To; going to. Too; too busy. Two; The number 2.
Other wise, it was great and I loved it. (Mostly because it was about a dog!) :D
If you could check out some of my games and rate them, all you have to do is click on my name, it should be clear.
I liked it. Since you aren't very considerate with what you rate my games, though, I'm giving it a 3.
I liked it! I loved how it goes in a loop.
Ps, please check out some of my games by clicking on my user next to this review.
This is the best text adventure I have ever played! I usually don't do the text adventures, because I get confused, and that's why I suck at making them, too. But this was simple, and wonderful!
Loved it. Loved it. LOVED IT!!!!!
Ps, check out some of my games, I think you'll like "The Perfect World." Warning, it isn't finished….
Like it so far, but that other dude's right, there is a blank page, please fix it and it'll be a great game.
That WAS cool!
Wow. Really makes you think, huh?
Nice game. A bit short but I like it that way, not enough time to get bored. :)
Ps, check out some of my games like, "Memory Path," Slender Park", "lost Dog", "The Perfect World", "What Happened?"
OMG RAGE! RAGE! RAGE! RAGE!!!!!
It's short, but I make short games, too.
Plus this game has a creative topic!
Check out my games, "Travelers Beware", "Lost Dog", and many, many more!
Needs work, also, I worked really hard on my Slender Park, and a lot of people liked it, so maybe you just don't know about slenderman.
Reality check, Justin Bieber in my oppinion is sucky. Though be careful of what you post on here!
I didn't think I'd like, it, but I did. Please check out some of my games like "Lost Dog", "What Happened?", "The Perfect World."
Awesome dude, when I first played it, not so good, but then you updated it, and it's awesome!
Thanks for reminding me about the tutorial, I'll try my best to understand it. Also, nice game, I don't know how you make it look so easy, and, I loved the "No flies ( or rats ) were injured during the making of this game."! Lol.
Pretty good, I won't lie, but add 2 safe paths instead of just 1, and it might be more interesting to others. Ps, check out my games!!! "Memory Path", "Lost Dog" or check out my other ones! :D
OMG, random! It's like my game, "Memory Path", I think you'll be interested, please play it!
This is somewhat similar to my game: "Memory Path" not the storyline, but how it goes in a circle. Nice, simple game. :-)
oh.
Ok…. strange, but interesting and got my interest.
I'm gonna give you a five 'cause I'm nice. Only thing, please check your capitals at the begining of sentences. Ps., Check out my game, "Memory Path", I think you'll find it interesting, and short, and random…. :D
Awesome.
Ps, try my games!!! XD
Not the best game I've ever played, but good.
I find it very confusing with all the directions; you can go here, here, here or here. Go here, you can go… etc.
Finish it!!!
It's awesome!!!!
Awesome!
You should make a sequel!
Ps, please check out my games, "Lost Dog", "Slender Park", "Memory Path", What Happened?", etc.
I love it how it's simply random, and how there's only one way to win.
Lol!
I don't understand your logic, and so, it's funny!
Great game, wow!
It really shows how depression is and the words are so meaningful!
Très belle histoire.
Je pense que tu n'as pas beaucoup de évaluation parce que prèsque personne sur cette site interne, mais mon province est français, alors je sais plupard de francais. Parles-tu Anglais? Si oui, sil' vous plais, peux tu regarder à mes jeux. Tu peux voire mes jeux par cliqué sur mon chose; Claire6129
Haha! I loved it!
Great job, another awesome game!
Ps, thanks for rating my game 5 star, too, I can't wait to try other games that you made!
I thought that this game had a great plot, though not many options, only a few that either killed you, or saved you;that part I liked, though I would like to see more options.
Very good, excellently written.
Though my only complaint is this; I find that it's not my story, that I'm just reading someone else's story and I only choose small things. Please check out my games; Lost Dog, Memory Path, and many more! (Even though I'm pretty new here!)
I didn't finish it yet, but so far it is great.
Also, Siddi, please check out some of my other games, I know that they aren't the best, but I am trying oh so hard, and I don't have a whole lot of time to complete a great, long game like yours; I get bored continuing on with the same game. So… yeah!
Omg, how do I win?
I love how you put in stuff like, you know, it's you talking and you're all like, because you're SO BAD at listening to the narator, you press the other button… and stuff. LOVE IT!! (Try my games, PLEASE!)
Just plain annoying; I can't do anything!!
I liked it, though I found that each page was too short, the font was ok, though. I look forward to playing your future games or any others you have made. Please try some of mine, you can see them by simply clicking my name. I would apreciate it if you give your honest oppinion, though if you seriously hated it, please don't rate it. Thanks in advance.
You must of been in the worst mood ever when you mad this, geez watch the language before you get kicked off!!
Now this is my kind of game!!!
I loved it!!!!!! Wanna try mine??
Can't wait until the next game!!
Haha!
Very good. Please check out my games, too, and I would like to see you add on more, but very good!
Very good for a first game.
Not too exciting, a bit confusing with all the places to go, ex, east south, south, west south, north, west, east…. But overal very good and descripted.
I liked your rat one better.
Lol.
Nice job.
Add more, and it'll be even better!
Um…
You've got tallent… But that's not really a great game.
Good…
But it's more of a story and it doesn't really give you good options.
Ex: He pushes off.
Options are:
Push Off
Push On
But you already know what to do because you said it.
Good but I'd like to see you give out more options.
I felt bad for giving you a 1 star on your other one, so I tried this one out and it was awesome!
Lol, the first time, I crapped on the couch,
but then I relized that I really needed to go, so I got to the bathroom in time.
It's easy and fun and awesome.
Sorry about my rating for the other one, it was probably a glitch, I'll try it again.
Awesome, but that sucks that mugging is not the answer...
This is the best one yet!
Great job!
I'm new here two, try out my stories!
Stray dog
Memory Path
Good first quest.
I'm pretty new here too,
If someone could check out my 2 stories : Memory Path and/or Stray Dog,
I'd really appreaciate the feed back.
Good job,
Claire6129
What the???
How do i win????
Seriously, too simple.
Try to make something that makes sense, ok?
