Love the way that my character from depressed nihilistic and always end up dying on every choice i make to weird, become the fastest man to elect as a president (and die fastest in first term) or avenge the unveiling reality of our daily morning breakfast.
love this type of site, look like an early web 2.0 that i can't experience anymore, and make me grateful playing this as a gen z-alpha generation.
Anyways, im just gonna sit back, skipping my work and eat Egg Lord's scrambled egg while tuning to beep bop babble babble broadcast and also getting shot in the head while lobotimizing myself with my razor sharp blade i just bought when buying bomb in dark web.
Heck yeah, feller. This is some top-quality low-quality text adventure. Looks like this is your first one. Congrats!
You know, you actually have a strong writing style. Some stories in here could get their own game. For some reason, the egg story was entertaining and could be developed much further if you so please. You also wrote an enjoyable journey to the moon. I would love to see you write a space comedy game.
I see a lot of potential here. Keep exercising your writing skills and play with the functionalities of your software. Text adventures are so addicting once you get in that rhythm. Cheers, feller!