It's just like what they say: The end is never the end is never the end is never the end is never the end is never the end is never the end is never the end is never the end is never the end is never the end is never...
This has some potential. It just needs some further proofreading, a little more polish, and maybe the protagonist should be an original character, but that's just me.
Like the cover art though. Gotta give you props for that. Don't know how this applies to the story, but it's a work in progress. It's bound to change.
Overall, good concept so far. I look forward to the updates to come.
