B.L.I.Z experiment (part one) by inaboxiscookie

strange things are happening. run before they catch you...

part two will come out soon.
Review by syxxity
04 Apr 2019
Spelling needs to be improved, it's hard to understand multiple parts of it. In a decently serious tone, suddenly the "what do you want to eat" pops up. Considering that it probably took maybe 2 or 3 minutes after the character was just relaxing, I assume they'd have to have eaten.

It's a good concept, but you need to fix a few things. :)
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