Pros:
1.) It's a good idea!
2.) It seems to have decent spelling.
Cons:
1.) Teachers DON'T shoot you when you dance around in class. Pretty sure that's illegal.
2.) Way too easy to die. Also, I'm pretty sure if someone knocked over the Bunsen, and the player got caught on fire, someone would help and/or you'd be rushed to the hospital.
Spelling needs to be improved, it's hard to understand multiple parts of it. In a decently serious tone, suddenly the "what do you want to eat" pops up. Considering that it probably took maybe 2 or 3 minutes after the character was just relaxing, I assume they'd have to have eaten.
It's a good concept, but you need to fix a few things. :)
Honestly, it seems like a good concept, but it's way too easy to die. The grammar is extremely horrible and during a somewhat serious scene, a random joke was put in. It's a good idea! You just need to work on it a bit. If these issues get fixed, this would probably be one of the very few games I like. :)
It's good, but it's kinda hard to understand. Please use "" when people are talking and fix grammar. I suggest using a grammar/spelling checking site if you can't do it all yourself. Other then that it's a great game so far.
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