A Shrunken Business Trip by boons123

Review Joehorn56

Hope it gets updated soon. What happened to the rest of your stories on here?

Comment flurfley

Is there any change with this update?

Comment Masterchief7348

To all wondering how to make and use the climbing tool you have to type it out ex: use paperclip on thread. And use climbing tool on bedsheets or chair. Hope this helps

Comment Hyphenzilla

Can someone please tell me how to make a climbing tool?

Comment aceshley1989

How do i use the climbing tool on the bed sheets?

Comment aceshley1989

Never mind.

Comment aceshley1989

How do you combine items?

Review TinyFoxy

Great game overall~ Interactions are spot on and I have a lot of fun exploring all the different ways to meet an ending, your very talented and I can't wait to see what comes in the future.

Review Duskdraak

Nice game hope you update it soon.

Comment Bester40

How do I use the climb tool? I made it, but don’t understand how to climb with it

Comment bee2

i hope this game isn't discontinued, it's one of my all-time favorites.

Comment Ava_xxx

Thank you, boons! ♥ Will check it out.

Comment boons123

I have added a new update, my friends.

Comment Sheograth10

This game has definitely got potential. The theme (shrinking around an office woman) is pretty unique among text adventures, so you have that as a big plus. And the general writing has been pretty high quality, so if you keep that up as you add content, it'll get even better.

I'm looking forward to see how your game grows in the future. And like Moth said below, I'll also wait before leaving a review, since I can apparently only give that one shot.

You're doing great! And I hope you continue to build on the game.

Comment HighImpactMoth

Very good game, I would leave a good review but since an account can only give one per game I'll wait for further updates to actually give one, my criticisms are purely taste based like not a fan of older people as giantesses as well as scat and fart deaths, would like more 'cleaner' deaths to have a good balance.

If I did leave a review I would give it a 3/5, I like how more original it is then most of the other games on the website plus how much more the setting adds to the deaths rather than blank high school giantess game #7, I like where the game is going and hope to see more.

Review proveyed

Technical issues:
- The stocking has a "tear" option that does nothing.
- The woman's waistband still has a "take" option.
- When at the woman's feet on her bed, the description implies her feet cannot be interacted with, but you forgot to implement the feet.

Grammar issues:
- During the death from climbing her lips, a space is missing between two sentences.

Opinion stuff:
Your game is very good. It's mechanically simple but that's fine, it's just a start and my game isn't much more complex anyway. I have tried to egg people in my Discord into making a game about office women because I love them, so this game is very fricking epic.

The writing is pretty good, the only issue being run-on sentences. I feel like you are capable of making every situation described in this game erotic. Typically people who try to cover a wide range of niches will produce a few that seem uninspired because they, themselves, aren't turned on by said niche. You write everything well.

I very much hope you continue work from here, especially if you grow as a writer. There's several deaths that show you have a talent at writing erotic stuff, but could work with emphasis and detail.

From how you write, as well, I think you might be a fan of my game as well? I write other stories under the name Juliet if you know me... if you do then I hope my praise means enough to keep you working on your game.

Good work.

Review AzurRanfan

I love this! Descriptions are great and so are the various ways to die.

Comment tEmPdom

Type use thread on paper clip fragment

Comment Chaos_Jeff

How do I combine items again? I can't figure out how.

Review Ava_xxx

Love the setting and direction the game is going in so far. Especially since it doesn't shy away from certain kinks. Very good writing & punctuation. Looking forward to seeing where the game goes. ^^