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Review for A Shrunken Business Trip

Technical issues:
- The stocking has a "tear" option that does nothing.
- The woman's waistband still has a "take" option.
- When at the woman's feet on her bed, the description implies her feet cannot be interacted with, but you forgot to implement the feet.

Grammar issues:
- During the death from climbing her lips, a space is missing between two sentences.

Opinion stuff:
Your game is very good. It's mechanically simple but that's fine, it's just a start and my game isn't much more complex anyway. I have tried to egg people in my Discord into making a game about office women because I love them, so this game is very fricking epic.

The writing is pretty good, the only issue being run-on sentences. I feel like you are capable of making every situation described in this game erotic. Typically people who try to cover a wide range of niches will produce a few that seem uninspired because they, themselves, aren't turned on by said niche. You write everything well.

I very much hope you continue work from here, especially if you grow as a writer. There's several deaths that show you have a talent at writing erotic stuff, but could work with emphasis and detail.

From how you write, as well, I think you might be a fan of my game as well? I write other stories under the name Juliet if you know me... if you do then I hope my praise means enough to keep you working on your game.

Good work.

Review for Tiny Thief 0.17 (A shrinking Game)

Aside from a lot of typos, this is a very good game. The grammar is fine but you might benefit from proofreading.

I hope that your game expands from here, as you practice more you'll likely become an even better writer and make something really awesome.

Review for Kira

epic but u gotta make the commands visible bruh

could this be the dark souls of giantess text adventures