life of a bison by bloopy180

this is a school project and i would love if you would give me feed back on it.
19 Jan 2018
1. Capitalization.
2. Spelling.
3. Grammar.

You have triggered me in all of the three ways. BUT! Great information. Although I know it is a school project and it's supposed to be realistic, I want you to add some lighthearted humor in it. It would fit well.

But yeah, that's all I have to say. Keep that in mind when making another story/project. You could just make a story just for fun, you know?

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