You have triggered me in all of the three ways. BUT! Great information. Although I know it is a school project and it's supposed to be realistic, I want you to add some lighthearted humor in it. It would fit well.
But yeah, that's all I have to say. Keep that in mind when making another story/project. You could just make a story just for fun, you know?
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