MythicalFlyingTurtles
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Reviews by MythicalFlyingTurtles
Review for The Asylum
29 May 2018
Booooo. The game is stolen, the story's broken, and I can't find another thing that rhymes with token.
Review for The Crawl of Lost Emptiness.
22 May 2018
No words can describe how much I can relate to this story.
And it's funny in some places too, like the fact that you can't eat anything other than pop tarts. (Ice cream binge anyone?)
And it's funny in some places too, like the fact that you can't eat anything other than pop tarts. (Ice cream binge anyone?)
Review for Dance Quest
12 Apr 2018
This is good. While I can see that this story is still not fully finished, I really like what's going down in this world. And "dance" is a unique theme.
(Looks at what I've written so far)
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(Clicks the box next to "Your Rating")
(Changes from 4-Good to 5-Fantastic)
KEEP UP DE GOOD WERK! (Consecutive Thumbs Up)
(Looks at what I've written so far)
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(Changes from 4-Good to 5-Fantastic)
KEEP UP DE GOOD WERK! (Consecutive Thumbs Up)
Review for Derpface and His Magical Pony
12 Mar 2018
tHIs Is amZINg!! I reat did a 5 oUt of faNtaStIK!
Seriously, though, good job. I love this game.... Specifically because of the potty and humor and sheer stupidity. Great job! KEEP IT COMING!
But add SOME seriousness to contrast the stupidity. I mean, you do need a solid storyline, not a bunch of random branches where you die randomly.
Seriously, though, good job. I love this game.... Specifically because of the potty and humor and sheer stupidity. Great job! KEEP IT COMING!
But add SOME seriousness to contrast the stupidity. I mean, you do need a solid storyline, not a bunch of random branches where you die randomly.
Review for The Ballad of Lazy Eye Pablo
01 Mar 2018
I was ashamed at how funny this story was compared to any of my stories. GG fellow, I have lost.
Review for The Darkness
27 Feb 2018
I was looking through the recent WIP stuff, I see my bud glutenwhip leaving a good review for this story, so I checked it out. And it's just my type of adventure! Loving the roleplay! <3
Review for Ilvermorny Experience
26 Feb 2018
AWESOME!
Great world you're making, and cool narration. But there are too many similiarities to Harry Potter... I guess that's inevitable, this being a school for witchcraft and wizardry. I was going to give this a 4 star, but it's a WIP, so who am I to judge? Keep up the awesome work!
(Psst... Check out my story too? I'd love your critique.)
Great world you're making, and cool narration. But there are too many similiarities to Harry Potter... I guess that's inevitable, this being a school for witchcraft and wizardry. I was going to give this a 4 star, but it's a WIP, so who am I to judge? Keep up the awesome work!
(Psst... Check out my story too? I'd love your critique.)
Review for Work Work Work
23 Jan 2018
Hmm. Very monotonous. Just like actual work. Maybe add some dating elements, or the possibility of getting fired?
Review for The Scarecrow Killer
19 Jan 2018
LOVE IT!
I've been exploring other people's stories for a while, and I gotta say, many of these are underrated. I had to say something. Keep up the good work!
(P.S. I am choosing being a killer because I have a feeling fighting my inner demons will be harder.)
I've been exploring other people's stories for a while, and I gotta say, many of these are underrated. I had to say something. Keep up the good work!
(P.S. I am choosing being a killer because I have a feeling fighting my inner demons will be harder.)
17 Jan 2018
I'm thinking it's gonna be good, but I gave up halfway because
1. Minecraft brings back bad memories
and
2. I am a grammar freak
1. Minecraft brings back bad memories
and
2. I am a grammar freak