A very simple, yet funny story - coming from a ten year old, I feel under average my age group! ;) Keep at it, I'm sure you'll have a very successful career... okay, you might not be the next Roald Dahl, but if you dedicate yourself to this, you have to do one thing - gimme half your earnings for listening to this inspiring speech thing!
Way too short. I also suspect the ten-year-old 'author' either had help, are older than they say, or are wasted doing IF and should be in college polishing their remarkably good grasp of English.