Door chapter One : Sky by bluestar7799

This is my first time doing this so it will be kinda basic, but you need to start somewhere I suppose.

This game has received an update to fix grammar mistakes.

UPDATE: a page clear option has been added
Comment Pipper
25 Nov 2016
lol I logged in just so I could say that this game is great plzzzzzz add on to it

Comment Balldanger
21 Oct 2016
Very good so far. I thought the shutting the door on him was funny

Comment bluestar7799
20 Oct 2016
@Gabe p. I enjoy your feedback but i'm a bit confused by your vague review and your belief this gamebook has
"Not any story whatsoever" if you could elaborate on what you mean so I could receive constructive criticism from you I would be very much obliged .

Review Gabe p.
19 Oct 2016
Not any story whatsoever

Comment bluestar7799
31 Jul 2016
@Thecelester thank you for your kind words. Don't worry chapter 2 is in the works

Comment Thecelester
31 Jul 2016
So sad it's over. Pls make more chapters. So interesting. Such good storytelling.

Review Thecelester
31 Jul 2016
Fantastic. Intriguing. Well made.

Love it, love it, love it.

Comment bluestar7799
13 Jul 2016
@XanMag thank you for the feedback.
I've fixed the grammar mistakes and I plan to have more options and alternative endings in the next chapter.

Comment XanMag
04 Jul 2016
Not a whole lot of choices and there are some grammar issues, but at least it is unique.

Review ToastLogic
29 Jun 2016
Great game :3c

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