Stray dog life 1 by Warriorcat_●▪

Review by Monoxide

I died by going up the sturdy vines. I lived by going up a bad ladder. I chose "let them take me" and for some reason Snake tried escaping instead. When I tried escape, they caught me anyway. I died in my sleep for talking to Chilo. I helped Chilo and he got me killed. I bullied Maska to see what would happen and the story stopped altogether. I did leapfrog over the fence thingy and the story stopped altogether again. No matter what you name the puppies, the game ends altogether.
I'll give you 2 stars because giving you 1 star is too harsh, because you tried. But still. You need to work on this.

Review by serenity56

When you are escaping you must and or the other dog or else he will tell the people and they will shoot you 3 times and kill you so you must ignore the other dog and talk to the nice dog and or the mean dog when you are escaping or else you will die

Review by BookCat24

If there's one thing I've learned, it's that CHILO IS EVIL.

Review by waterfall wild

So good. i like making games like this