The System [Early, Early, Early Pre-Build] 0.05 by CloudGrain

This game was added to the Sandpit for the following reason: Incomplete

The game appears to be unfinished, or is a demo of a longer work which has not yet been completed. Once the game has been completely written, it may be re-categorised.

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Quest Gamebook

Incredibly Early Build of a Sci-Fi Gamebook. Will be updating often to the best of my abilities. Very little to look at right now, probably not really worth your time except to explore and see if the 20+ pages of the gamebook might tickle your fancy in another month or two when it's a little more complete.

0.02-0.04 16 November 13 Update [ALPHA Build]
-All options are fully playable in the gamebook
-Pages added

0.05 17 November 13 Update 20:08
-Pages added
-Some more pictures have been added.

*Any and all comments are Appreciated, especially if bugs/issues are encountered.*

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Review An Ridire Dubh

10 Nov 2015

Only a few pages made so far. To me it's far too incomplete to be worth testing.

Comment Odie_da_Bossé

18 Dec 2014

Hm... although this is unfinished, and a basic storyline should be established before a game is published, this really is a great game, the content makes up for it's faults.

Pictures were a nice touch, and the suspense that builds within the story is fantastic. Well done. Remember, don't make the game too long, or your players will lose interest after a while.

Waiting for a finished product. I will rate this when it comes out in full.

Comment Frostedge

12 Dec 2014

Is it just me, or is this gamebook dead?

Review abergsma

06 Nov 2014

Very well written and definitely exciting! Some people are against using pictures but I think the artwork really adds to the athmosphere here. Please finish it :)

Review btrhoads

18 Mar 2014

Great use of imagery and well written. You should finish it. I am sure it would be worth 5 stars finished.

Review Llama_King

12 Mar 2014

I wanna see moar!

Comment Claire6129

01 Feb 2014

Please finish this awesome game, and, if you want, try some of my games, Lost Dog, Stray Dog, Slender Park, Memory Path, and others. Thanks :D

Review Claire6129

01 Feb 2014

Finish it!!!
It's awesome!!!!

Review OkieDokie

01 Feb 2014

Looking forward to the rest. Please hurry with it! :D

Review Jolly Good Show

16 Nov 2013

Can't wait for the full version to be released, I am very interested as to the characters past and the reason he has been awoken. I will definitely be playing this and the art work really adds to it.