The System [Early, Early, Early Pre-Build] 0.05 by CloudGrain

This game was added to the Sandpit for the following reason: Incomplete

The game appears to be unfinished, or is a demo of a longer work which has not yet been completed. Once the game has been completely written, it may be re-categorised.

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Incredibly Early Build of a Sci-Fi Gamebook. Will be updating often to the best of my abilities. Very little to look at right now, probably not really worth your time except to explore and see if the 20+ pages of the gamebook might tickle your fancy in another month or two when it's a little more complete.

0.02-0.04 16 November 13 Update [ALPHA Build]
-All options are fully playable in the gamebook
-Pages added

0.05 17 November 13 Update 20:08
-Pages added
-Some more pictures have been added.

*Any and all comments are Appreciated, especially if bugs/issues are encountered.*

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Legacy Player: The "Play online" link above uses the new Quest Viva WebPlayer, which is currently in Beta. In case of issues, you can try the old WebPlayer.

Review by An Ridire Dubh

10 Nov 2015

Only a few pages made so far. To me it's far too incomplete to be worth testing.

(3)

Review by abergsma

06 Nov 2014

Very well written and definitely exciting! Some people are against using pictures but I think the artwork really adds to the athmosphere here. Please finish it :)

(5)

Review by btrhoads

18 Mar 2014

Great use of imagery and well written. You should finish it. I am sure it would be worth 5 stars finished.

(4)

Review by Llama_King

12 Mar 2014

I wanna see moar!

(5)

Review by Claire6129

01 Feb 2014

Finish it!!!
It's awesome!!!!

(5)

Review by OkieDokie

01 Feb 2014

Looking forward to the rest. Please hurry with it! :D

(5)

Review by Jolly Good Show

16 Nov 2013

Can't wait for the full version to be released, I am very interested as to the characters past and the reason he has been awoken. I will definitely be playing this and the art work really adds to it.

(5)

Review by Reidolol

16 Nov 2013

short but creative,this the reward

(5)

Review by Masterinthomas

16 Nov 2013

Wow! This is a great story! :) Really good job on making this stuff, and all of the pictures, really nice!

(5)

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Written by
CloudGrain

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Written for Quest 5.4
Added 16 Nov 2013
Updated 18 Nov 2013

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The System [Early, Early, Early Pre-Build] 0.05 by CloudGrain

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