The mage :Introduction to magic by gggiioo

Please note that this is my first game so its small and simple. I also plan on makeing more of these (Even if people dont like my games) so this is just the first.

You are a mage trying to pass a test to join a guild, To join you must discover the name of a magic creature through clues laid around the guildhall.

Please give feedback on what you think of the game, What I could do to improve it and bug reports.

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Comment XanMag

06 Apr 2015

Suggestions:
1. Check grammar - lots of commas where there should be periods. No biggie. Easy fix.
2. There are verb use problems. I tried "use shovel", "use shovel on lump", "dig with shovel", etc and nothing works. There's a monkey in room description but I can't see it. I can't look at/read scroll or list. Stuff like that. It's a pretty simple fix. It is very distracting though when trying to play.
On the bright side... I think there is potential here as it appears you have lots of puzzles/problems to solve. I went to maybe a dozen rooms and stopped due to aggravation trying to interact with stuff. But, I think it has potential. If you want any help, pm me!