First Time by RaptorFace

Interactive text based game where you make choices in which someones life might depend on. This is only part one and it's just a test. I hope you like this so i can keep on making the part 2 and maybe more.

Part 2 will be longer if you guys encourage me. Thank you for playing.

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Review Camero2K

04 Sep 2021

Very great game!
You should expand it with Part 2

Review Sunmi

27 Aug 2021

waiting for second part

Comment dvergara$seesa.org

19 Mar 2021

what is your age

Comment dvergara$seesa.org

19 Mar 2021

hi how are u what are doing

Review Ronin Miller

22 Jan 2021

This is a great game recomed it to others.

Comment Person1

01 Apr 2020

Alright...
Joking!! really good excited for part 2

Review Heres a problem

10 Feb 2020

I LOVE THE SOUNDS OMG

Review Nanacollapse

24 Jun 2017

Cool, can't wait to play part II!
Love the sound and themes

Comment KawaiiFruit

29 Apr 2017

Omg i just started this story and i already love it keep it up :3

Review kay20098

28 Sep 2016

please make part two that has a very good theme going if you kept it going it would be awesome

Review madgirl2020

25 May 2016

Quite good, you should make part 2.

Comment vicbrusal

25 Dec 2015

Not bad!
One thing I didn't really like about the game though was the sound effects. They're rather unnecessary and sometimes too long. Not to mention I got stuck on the "It's better I wait for her than she to wait for me." part. There's no sound, there's nothing else, it just ends there.
Still, I see a great project coming, and I can't wait to read more from you!

Comment XanMag

23 Dec 2015

You really should do away with 'waiting for the sound to stop' before proceeding. Let the person read the next section after their choice without waiting for the sound to end. I stopped at the "wait in silence" option because I don't know if there was supposed to be a sound playing and I had to wait or what...? But, there was no sound.

It is not poorly written, so that is a huge plus. I did notice minor grammar issues - like souvenir and plane spelled incorrectly.

I will be glad to come back to this after updates to fully review and rate. Good luck.