O P P O R T U N I T Y by CatsCatsCats

This is just a simple adventure in a twisted land, interact with the people around you and try to find your place in the world.

(You can talk to people by using the "Talk, Talk to or Speak" command, and some commands aren't shown to you directly and need to be figured out, some characters can be asked about their job with the "ask about job" command, to change the font sizes, type the commands "Change font size small" "Change font size big" "Change font size default")
Comment XanMag
01 Jun 2015
Hmmm...

Was there a game here? A problem to solve? I don't know...

Whatever this is, it has some promise. It is simple, but there is some uniqueness to it as well. Since there really were no puzzles to be completed, it was certainly very easy. Am I correct in assuming this might be for a presentation or class somewhere? Were you just fiddling with some of the controls in the Quest GUI? I think you might have some promise as a game creator on this site if you chose to explore it.

Suggestions: click (or unclick in this case) some prefix options on some of your nouns. It seems you are using commas everywhere instead of using periods then beginning a new sentence. If you are going to reroute us players to some website, try to make it relevant to the game play (maybe incorporate it into some puzzles we have to solve?). You've got some wonky directions going on in some rooms. I enter a room with a 'nw' (for example) and I leave the room also 'nw' and end up in the same place.

If you have time and are interested, look into making more games and spend some time exploring Quest options.

Also, ALL players of this, make sure you sue the pop-up windows rather than trying to type in commands. Happy gaming!

XanMag

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