The Murderer Episode 1 by VideoGamer

Review MehCandie

There can be more to be wished for in terms of grammar. It doesn't offer much interactivity and choices. It's more of just telling a story, which kind of defeats the purpose of "playing" this. I know it's kind of difficult to implement that type of thing for the story you are looking to tell, but at least the story seems like it is going somewhere, that's a good start.

Review Peeyty

Really good story. Can't wait for part two.

Comment snazzy ray

I mean the way you're sentences were formed

Review snazzy ray

The style in which you wrote this annoys me, but it's pretty good

Comment ChazCliffhanger

Too little choices.

Review mentlegen

Not bad but more choices