Well you would end up dying if you did basically anything other than the intended path, you would die. Doesn't change the fact that I enjoyed it though, I mean what do you expect when you're a king "for a day?" :)
The story checks out to be one of horror. The pictures look strange, I'll give you credit on that. It just doesn't creep you out our actually deliver that "horror" factor, so the wording could use work. The narrator makes you feel like you are breaking the 4th wall, or talking with you sarcastically as if you are buddies, and that really does not convey horror in a way where you can feel it through the screen. To each their own though.
There can be more to be wished for in terms of grammar. It doesn't offer much interactivity and choices. It's more of just telling a story, which kind of defeats the purpose of "playing" this. I know it's kind of difficult to implement that type of thing for the story you are looking to tell, but at least the story seems like it is going somewhere, that's a good start.
I loved the level of interactivity and the amount of things you could play around with. However, the storyline is kind ridiculous. It makes you go back and forth so many times, including if you forgot to do something. Especially dealing with Violet's annoying personality, the nagging to this extent is unbearable, but I guess you have to be able to make it so that everything is executed in chronological order, but still ridiculous. Otherwise, great game!
Wow. The way you had drawn out the feeling was astounding. I still think "Perfect Princess" is not perfect at all. Not even close. If I was really experiencing this I would not care and in fact I wouldn't even do it, probably never even go in the first place. Keep it up! :)
Just like in my comment, I can really imagine the scenery and characters! I love all the food and how you give them out! It seems so heart-warming! Possibly, since it says 'first chapter' in the title, I can't wait for the next chapter! No pressure though! :)
