Dream in A Dream by Aulia Yasinta

Rylee is an eleven-year-old girl who lives in Miami, United State of America. During this summer vacation, she was having a hard time choosing between staying in Miami with Aunt Leslie or going with her parents to Grenada, Spain to meet her Abuela. Her decisions then lead her to a strange experience that she never imagined before.
Review by Techno09
31 Dec 2022
The only problems are:
1. Some grammatical errors here and there.
2. The "It was all a dream" explanation is pretty generic.
3. The choices don't affect the ending.
4. It's too short.
Overall, for a first game, it is pretty good.
4/5
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