An interesting idea, and could be improved with proofreading. With a once-over and more description, this game could become far better than it is now. Take the time to put a little extra effort into how it is now and make a good impression so that people will want to play your game. A little bit of tender love and care is very important, so put in the extra few minutes! I hope you update with better revisions someday, it would be very nice to be able to change my review to give you a higher rating!