Love the aesthetic! It's very unique and was easy on the eyes to read. The go back button is certainly nice, it makes it easier to play through and see the endings while not having to restart every time! The "put your hands up and take a few steps back" option leads to a page with the picture being larger than the rest, you may want to fix that. The art you had included is very well made!
Alongside that, I'd suggest making your passages a little bit longer. I'd also suggest some proofreading since there are some spots where the grammar appears to struggle. "ask ragu he it needs help" is one of those spots, and should likely be changed to something like "ask ragu if he needs help".
With a little extra time and a few fixings here and there, you could very well make a wonderful short game! You obviously have style, and it makes the game very desirable to play! Keep up the good work, and I hope that you're able to update this so that I can give an even higher rating!
An interesting idea, and could be improved with proofreading. With a once-over and more description, this game could become far better than it is now. Take the time to put a little extra effort into how it is now and make a good impression so that people will want to play your game. A little bit of tender love and care is very important, so put in the extra few minutes! I hope you update with better revisions someday, it would be very nice to be able to change my review to give you a higher rating!
I like it! As someone who really loves the idea of androids and really can't get enough, this seems like it has great potential to become a good story. You've obviously been making sure that you catch as many grammar and spelling mistakes in this, which is nice to see. Just double check from time to time, sometimes a stray mistake appears to be in the text (not often though). Since this is still fairly short, there isn't much for me to say about the game. With more time and care, I'm sure that you'll be able to finish it out and write a great game! Keep up the good work!
