Part one is about Cricketsong's kit hood. Later in the story(like part two), Cricketpaw learns of a prophecy her sister is in. Her brother, jealous of his sister's importance, runs away.
(If you played it, thanks for playing! If you could give me some feedback and constructive criticism that would be great. If you could also tell me who your favorite character is that would also be great!)
Very good so far, especially for your very first game. It's quite short, but you did say it was unfinished, so I'm assuming it's going to get a lot longer. It's nice and descriptive, maybe just try to work on grammar.