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The Last Heroes chapter 0 by Dekuopa
This game was added to the Sandpit for the following reason: Too short
This game is too short to be put into a category. Players expect games not to be all over within a few seconds.
This game is too short to be put into a category. Players expect games not to be all over within a few seconds.
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First chapter of a long story
Review
by TTPeriod
19 Jul 2015
There is some capitalisation errors, and when someone speaks, you usually start a new paragraph, I think? Otherwise, you'll be fine. I also want to point out a spelling error-- this is how you spell unconsciousness.
I don't get the story fully yet, be sure to make the challenge/problem clear.
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