Everyone seems to have been hard on you, so I'll be a bit nicer :)
It was short, and slightly entertaining. It had a story. I think choosing the wrong option could have had more of an effect on the story. The story was a bit linear. Maybe if you were to make a sequel, you make it a bit more branching.
It was short, but sweet. I noticed one typo > "gaurds" instead of 'guards'. I did dislike the lack of concrete effect that my choices had on the story, even when I chose different options, I would either die or end up at the same location as the other choice two screens later. But, considering it is your first posting and is a homework assignment (high school? post-secondary? Maybe I need to go back to school if programming and IF game are the assignments now.) I thought I it pretty good. I expect you received/ will receive a good grade, especially if you fix that typo!
Really short. Kind of boring. I would give it a one, but I've seen games much worse than this, so I'll give you the benefit of the doubt and assume this is your first game.
Average rating
(2.67)
Written by sol476
Plays 3010
Downloads 2481 Download file
Written for Quest 5.4
Published 16 Sep 2013
Updated 18 Sep 2013
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