A Train Trip Gone Way Too Far [A] by Rendez

Review by Kubel82

soz I hate to say this but it is dumb

Review by DePaw

Retard, plain and simple.

Few comments: use proper sentences, less exclamation marks, and calm down.

From the intro: "The Egineer has the key to unlock it. But his door was locked by his partner. If you find you can the key to the engineer's door took get a caboose key. The train door is locked as well. Take out the sniper before you get or your toast!"

Love the spelling, nonsensical sentences, and use of 'your' to mean 'you are'. IT goes down hill from there...