Infected Ship by mr mc textadventure

Comment mr mc textadventure

I wish I could review my own game so I could remind people how crap this 'text adventure' is.

First of all, my old grammar and spelling were just absolute dog water. There are misspellings and grammar issues here and there, scattered all over the freaking place.
Number two: the 'jokes' are unfunny. I almost had a seizure and died because of the concentrated energy of cringe that was emanating from my old game. Also, bonus complaint: the dialogue is completely unnatural. And another minor complaint: I just threw 'heck' around like some kindergartener making substitutes for swear words so that they don't get in trouble with Mrs. M or whatever.
Number three: there is a severe lack of choices, making the game super linear. The only multiple-choice sections are minimal and usually don't affect the progress of the game.
Number four: There is severe plagiarism here. In case if you don't get this complaint, I took heavy inspiration from various sci-fi media. Metroid Fusion is all over the place in this game, and so is Infested (which is a point-and-click game made by GrahfMetal, which I highly recommend checking out). And two other minor complaints: the descriptions are uninteresting and short, and the music (mostly from Metroid Fusion) is stolen without credit.
And, the last one: The only attempts at a 'plot' I made in this heaping pile of trash is rushed, irrelevant and stupid. All tension in the game is broken by the constant abundance of cringe. The ending with the evil, boring, uninteresting, generic AI (a plot twist constantly thrown about by unoriginal sci-fi) is just... pure garbage. It's quite stupid and thrown in to add meaning to the game, and that is putting it at the least. Deus ex machinas are thrown about too a lot.

TL;DR: This game is cringe and boring, and I am surprised that it wasn't thrown into the murky Sandpit by now.

Comment mr mc textadventure

STOP PLAYING THIS GAME THIS IS A CRINGY GAMEBOOK I MADE A LONG TIME AGO