Spelling needs to be improved, it's hard to understand multiple parts of it. In a decently serious tone, suddenly the "what do you want to eat" pops up. Considering that it probably took maybe 2 or 3 minutes after the character was just relaxing, I assume they'd have to have eaten.
It's a good concept, but you need to fix a few things. :)
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